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India
Kolkata
83, High Street
Mr Kumar Singh
17th January, 2021
65, Mount Road
Mumbai
The Phone Point
India
Subject: Rectify/Replace Defective Mobile Phone
Sir,
The Phone Point enjoys a good reputation and goodwill, so I expect you to
look into the matter at the earliest so as to enable me to use my mobile phone as conveniently as I. was using it before. I had purchased a mobile phone Nokia E-63 from your showroom Bill No. 4020 on 22nd December. I was using it to my satisfaction since I bought it but for the past few days I have noticed that I now need to charge my phone after every 4-5 hours, unlike earlier when I used to charge my phone after almost 24 hours. Despite the fact that I am using the phone for the same duration as before the battery life has reduced drastically. It is my request to you to rectify this defect with the battery, or replace the handset that comes with a one-year warranty.
Looking forward to your early response.
Kind regards
Mr Kumar Singh
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India Kolkata 83, High Street Mr Kumar Singh 17th January, 2021 65, Mount Road Mumbai The Phone Point India Subject: Rectify/Replace Defective Mobile Phone Sir, The Phone Point enjoys a good reputation and goodwill, so I expect you to look into the matter at the earliest so as to enable me to use my mobile phone as conveniently as I. was using it before. I had purchased a mobile phone Nokia E-63 from your showroom Bill No. 4020 on 22nd December. I was using it to my satisfaction since I bought it but for the past few days I have noticed that I now need to charge my phone after every 4-5 hours, unlike earlier when I used to charge my phone after almost 24 hours. Despite the fact that I am using the phone for the same duration as before the battery life has reduced drastically. It is my request to you to rectify this defect with the battery, or replace the handset that comes with a one-year warranty. Looking forward to your early response. Kind regards Mr Kumar Singh