Всем привет, нужна помощь человека владеющего английским языком

Подскажите пожалуйста, правильно ли написан текст песни, ну не на счет слов, а вообще в целом нормально выглядит? Строки по смыслу верно написаны?

Cosmic Dreams

[Verse 1]
In the silence of the night, (ohh)
Stars are sparkling, shining bright, (shining bright)
I gaze up and lose my way (ahh)
In the vastness where dreams sway. (dreams sway)

[Pre-Chorus]
Galaxies spin, a cosmic dance (ohh)
In this universe, we take our chance, (take our chance)
Lost in wonder, far and wide (ahh)
Among the stars, where we reside. (we reside)

[Chorus]
To the stars, we soar and glide (ohh)
In the cosmos, where our dreams collide (dreams collide)
Feel the gravity of love and light (ohh)
In the endless night, we take flight. (we take flight)

[Verse 2]
Nebulas paint the skies so grand (ohh)
Planets drift in a timeless band, (timeless band)
Through the blackness, we will find (ahh)
A universe that's intertwined. (intertwined)

(Pre-Chorus)
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(Chorus)
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[Bridge]
Through the void, our spirits rise (ohh)
As we journey through the skies, (through the skies)
In this realm of endless space (ahh)
We find our place, our own embrace. (own embrace)

(Chorus)
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[Outro]
Stars will guide us, never far (ohh)
In this galaxy, we are the stars (we are the stars)
Together in this cosmic trance (ohh)
We’ll dance forever in the vast expanse. (vast expanse)