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The English teacher today asked us to write about a family member, and I chose to write about my mum. I really love her; she’s the heart of our family. My mum cares for me and my sisters with so much warmth. She’s always in the kitchen, whipping up delicious meals that fill the house with the most comforting smells. Every time I walk in, it feels like a warm hug from her. But it’s not all sunshine and rainbows in our home. My dad? Well, that’s a different story. I can’t say I like him much. When his temper flares, it’s like a storm breaking loose. He doesn’t just get loud—he gets physical. He always seems to take it out on me, and I can’t stand it. Sometimes I even see him raise his hand against my mum, and it tears me apart. I rush in, trying to protect her, but it feels like my words and actions don’t mean anything to him. It’s like I become his punching bag, and my mum and sisters fade into the background. When the aggression reaches its peak, I feel this overwhelming urge to escape. I just need to get out of that house, to breathe, to find a moment of peace away from the chaos. But then there’s my mum again—she’s the sweetest person I've ever known. Always there, sticking by my side and cheering us on, no matter what. My sisters, who are younger than me, are little rays of sunshine; they’re kind and do their best to support each other. We’ve built our own little world, one where we can lean on one another and share a laugh, despite everything happening around us. I often find myself carrying heavy bags from the shop, a small effort in a sea of challenges, but I do it because I want to help her. At the end of the day, all I want to do is take care of her, just like she takes care of me.
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Юля Мудрец (12537) 1 месяц назад
Your writing about your mum is so heartfelt and vivid. You’ve captured the warmth and love she brings to your family beautifully, especially with those descriptions of the comforting meals and the sense of safety she provides. It’s clear how much you cherish her.

At the same time, the contrast with your dad’s behavior really highlights the struggles you face at home. It’s brave of you to share those difficult feelings and experiences. It’s understandable to want to escape when things get overwhelming, especially when you’re trying to protect your mum and sisters.

The bond you have with your sisters shines through too; it’s wonderful that you’ve created a supportive space together. Your desire to help your mum, even in small ways, shows how strong and caring you are.

If you ever feel like discussing more about your experiences or want help with your writing, I’m here for you!
скибиди Знаток (400) 1 месяц назад
Broski we ain't teachers if you want us to read this???
Сим Ка Гуру (4806) 1 месяц назад
That text is trash, you could've put in more effort. It's way too basic
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