Кендалл Дуду
Мастер
(1118)
1 неделю назад
me be in my (not your) house. me be cryin', me be careful.
my father rewards on the door, me screamin', me promenade. my father angriness, my father is white muscle cool man.
my father damaged the door, my father cryin' and huggin' me, me crying very very much more than before
para 1: set the scene (who,when,where,what)
paras 2-3: events in chronological order climax event
para 4: what happened in the end, character's feelings
(4 абзаца, 12 предл-й, с завязкой, кульминацией, развязкой)