Помогите, пожалуйста!!! (см. внутри)
Мне дали задание написать на английском сочинение на тему : "Внешность и характер друга" и "Мой любимый актер"....Я его написала, но только не знаю правильно ли... Перевод слов кажись точный, но в самом построении предложений я не уверена... Помогите, проверьте, кто понимает английский (я и по русски с трудом шурупаю)...
My friend Alex
I am not so sociable person and approach to a choice of friends seriously. I consider Alex as the good friend. We are familiar any more the first year. He is very lovely and sociable person. He has a kind heart and always ready to help.
He is the good interlocutor, it is interesting to talk with him on any themes. He has a good quiet character. He hasn’t bad habits: he does not smoke and does not take alcohol.
Alex has attractive appearance, he’s tall and he’s got brown hair and grey eyes. He has a furtive look. He’s got pretty face: a direct nose, chubby cheeks, a high forehead, thin lips, an oblong chin… Alex has a snow-white beautiful smile and cheerful nature.
Also he don’t strongly worries concerning the appearance, but is always dressed in clean clothes. He prefers a free fashion.
He go in for sport and has the strong hands. He likes to listen to the music and to walk with his friends.
Alex is very good person, but he has some lacks: he is very obstinate and never listens councils of other people (because of it we are sometimes littered, but I am grateful to destiny that I have such remarkable friend)!!!
My favorite actor
Daniel Radcliffe is my favorite actor.
Daniel Jacob Radcliffe (born 23 July 1989) is an English actor, best known for playing Harry Potter in the feature film series based on the popular book series. Radcliffe has also made appearances in stage productions and a number of TV shows and films, including the ITV film My Boy Jack and the stage show Equus, for which he was nominated for a Drama Desk Award.
Daniel Jacob Radcliffe was born in Queen Charlotte's Hospital, Hammersmith, West London, England,[ the only child of Alan George Radcliffe, a literary agent, and Marcia Jeannine Gresham (née Marcia Gresham Jacobson), a casting agent who was involved in several films for the BBC, including The Inspector Lynley Mysteries and, most recently, Walk Away And I Stumble. Radcliffe's mother is Jewish and a native of Westcliff-on-Sea, Essex (her family's surname was anglicized from "Gershon"); his father is Protestant and originally from Northern Ireland.
Radcliffe first expressed a desire to act at the age of five. In December 1999, he made his acting debut in the BBC's televised two-part adaptation of the Charles Dickens novel David Copperfield, portraying the title character as a young boy.
He is twenty. He has brown hair and blue eyes. His height is 1.68 meters. I think he is very attractive. I don't know him in real life, but I hope he is kind and generous. He was born in London, and in England people are very polite, and I think Daniel is polite too.
My friend Alex
I am not so sociable A person and choose my friends carefully. I consider Alex as A good friend. We are have known each other for almost a year (английский оригинал непонятный!!) . He is A very lovely and sociable person. He has a kind heart and IS always ready to help.
He is a good interlocutor (person to talk to), it is interesting to talk with him on any theme. He has a good and quiet character. He hasn’t (any) bad habits: he does not smoke and does not drink alcohol.
Alex has an attractive appearance, he’s tall and he’s got brown hair and grey eyes. He has a furtive look. He’s got A pretty face: an even nose, chubby cheeks, a high forehead, thin lips, an oblong chin… Alex has a snow-white beautiful smile and A cheerful nature.
Also he DOESN'T strongly worrY about appearanceS, but is always dressed in clean clothes (противоречиво)! . He prefers cosy clothes (a cosy way of dressing).
He likes sport and has strong hands. He likes to listen to music and to walk with his friends.
Alex is very good person, but he has some mistakes: he is very obstinate and never listens TO councils of other people (because of THAT we sometimes get into arguments, but I am grateful to destiny that I have such A remarkable friend)!!!
My favorite actor (favourite по-английски! )
Daniel Radcliffe is my favorite actor.
Daniel Jacob Radcliffe (born 23 July 1989) is an English actor, best known for playing Harry Potter in the films based on the popular books by J.K. Rowling. Radcliffe has also made appearances in stage productions and a number of TV shows and films, including the ITV film My Boy Jack and the stage show Equus, for which he was nominated for a Drama Desk Award.
Daniel Jacob Radcliffe was born in Queen Charlotte's Hospital, Hammersmith, West London, England,[ the only child of Alan George Radcliffe, a literary agent, and Marcia Jeannine Gresham (née (born) Marcia Gresham Jacobson), a casting agent who was involved in several films for the BBC, including The Inspector Lynley Mysteries and, most recently, Walk Away And I Stumble. Radcliffe's mother is Jewish and a native of Westcliff-on-Sea, Essex (her family's surname was anglicized from "Gershon"); his father is A Protestant and originally from Northern Ireland.
Radcliffe first expressed a desire to act at the age of five. In December 1999, he made his acting debut in the BBC's televised two-part adaptation of the Charles Dickens novel David Copperfield, portraying the title character as a young boy.
He is twenty. He has brown hair and blue eyes. His height is 1.68 meters. I think he is very attractive. I don't know him in real life, but I hope he is kind and generous. He was born in London, and in England people are very polite, and I think Daniel is polite, too.
My friend Alex
I am not A sociable person and approach to a choice of friends seriously. I consider Alex TO BE MY good friend. We KNOW EACH OTHER FOR more THAN ONE year. He is A very lovely and sociable person. He has a kind heart and always ready to help.
He is the good interlocutor HAS GOOD COMMUNICATION SKILLS - Что вы здесь сказать то хотели?? , it is interesting to DISCUSS any TOPIC WITH HIM / CHAT TO HIM. He has a good CALM character. He hasn’t any bad habits: he does not smoke and does not take alcohol.
Alex has attractive appearance, he’s tall and he’s got brown hair and grey eyes. He has a furtive WHAT??? look. He’s got HANDSOME face: a STRAIGHT nose, chubby WHAAAAT????cheeks, a high forehead, thin lips, an oblong OMG!!! may be FIRM ?? chin… Alex has a -----beautiful smile and cheerful nature. ( Алекс, по описанию, довольно уродлив. Не забивайте текст в Промт переводчик, получается мура. Посмотрите любой нормальный текст в учебнике и просто перекопируйте от туда - вашего Алекса с толстыми щеками все равно учитель никогда не видел. )
Also he DOESN'T WORRY ABOUT HIS APPEARANCE / IS NOT BOTHERED ABOUT HIS APPEARANCE, but HE is always dressed in clean clothes. He prefers a free fashion. (what the hell is this?? Casual style may be???)
He DOES sportS and has strong hands (better say FIT BODY or HE IS FIT) . He likes to listen to the music and to HANG ON (SPEND TIME) with his friends.
Alex is A very good person, but he IS NOT WITHOUT FAULTS : he is very obstinate and never listens TO OTHER PEOPLE'S OPINION? ADVISE? Что сказать то хотели? of other people (because of it we are sometimes littered WTF? Вы друг друга мусором забрасываете в мометы ссор? BECAUSE OF THIS WE SOMETIMES ARGUE, but I am grateful -------that I have such A GOOD friend)!!! (ничего из описанного не делает алекса Remarkable)
Ну, на второй кусок меня уже не хватит. Пусть кто-нибудь еще мучается!
My friend Alex
I am not such a sociable person and take the issue of choosing friends really seriously. I consider Alex as a good friend. We have been friends for the first year. He is a very lovely and sociable person. He has a kind heart and is always ready to help.
He is a good interlocutor, it is interesting to talk with him on any themes. He has a good quiet personality. He hasn’t any bad habits: he does not smoke and does not take alcohol.
Alex has an attractive appearance, he’s tall and he’s got brown hair and grey eyes. He has a furtive look. He’s got a pretty face: a straight nose, chubby cheeks, a high forehead, thin lips, an oblong chin… Alex has a snow-white handsome smile and is rather cheerful.
Also he isn't especially concerned about his appearance, but is always dressed in clean clothes. He prefers free style.
He go in for sport and has the strong hands. He likes to listen to the music and to walk with his friends.
Alex is very good person, but he has some lacks: he is very obstinate and never listens councils of other people (because of it we are sometimes littered, but I am grateful to destiny that I have such remarkable friend)!!!
Alex as the good friend, на Alex is a good friend
We are familiar any more the first year. ---вообще не ясно что. Мож заменить на что попроще?
He is the good interlocutor на He is a good interlocutor
worries concerning the appearance я бы убрала the.
but is always dressed in clean clothes я бы заменила на he has clean clothes everyday
He go in for sport and has the strong hands на He's a sportsman and has strong hands.
and to walk with his на and going for a walk with his
of it в скобках убрать совсем.
remarkable(это скорее про знаменитостей) на wonderful
вот и все!
1.He hasn’t GOT bad habits....
TAKE ALCOHOL лучше заменить на TO ACCEPT ALCOHOL
Also he don’t strongly worries (concerning the)ABOUT HIS appearance
but HE is always dressed in clean clothes.
2.n stage productions and IN a number of TV shows and films