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Tat'yana Smerdova Ученик (158), закрыт 6 лет назад
7. The places that attract tourists in the UK include Royal London, Buckingham Palace, Westminster Abbey, Whitehall and Trafalgar Square, St Paul’s Cathedral, and the Tower of London, Windsor Castle, the Queen’s house in Greenwich, the Palace of Holyrood house in Edinburgh and other places in the UK that are connected with the Crown, Castle, Leeds Castle and others, Madam Tussaud’s Museum of Waxworks, and the wonders of the world – the famous Stonehenge.
Дополнен 7 лет назад
ВОТ оригинальный текст прочитатв его надо ответить на вопрос ВОПРОС What places in the UK attract tourists? ТЕКСТ :As for me, I’m fond of history and I’ve read a lot about English kings and queens. I’d like to visit all places in London which are connected with Royal London, such as Buckingham Palace, Westminster Abbey, Whitehall and Trafalgar Square, St Paul’s Cathedral, and the Tower of London. And I’d like to visit places which are not in London, such as Windsor Castle, the Queen’s house in Greenwich, the Palace of Holyrood house in Edinburgh and other places in the UK which are connected with the Crown. The UK is famous for its castles such as Edinburgh Castle and Leeds Castle and others, and I’d like to see them with my own eyes. Another place which is worth seeing is Madam Tussaud’s Museum of Waxworks. This museum consists of several halls with wax images of outstanding political characters, poets and writers, world-famous film stars and musicians. Then I’d like to see one of the wonders of the world – the famous Stonehenge. Every year thousands of young people go to Stonehenge to take part in the midsummer Druid festival. I wish I were there.
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SL Matrix Мастер (1986) 7 лет назад
В принципе правильно, но лучше разделить на 2 или 3 предложения. А так напоминает Толстого с предложением на 2-х страницах..
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