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Globalization
Hello! Today I want to talk you about globalization. Globalization -it's something what connect peoples from different country. For example: technologies, music, eat, clothes, sport and many other things. But today I talk about three of this: about technologies, sport and about food.
Firstly I want to talk you about technologies. Technologies it's computers, websites, telephones, medicine. All of this connect us. By some websites we can talk and chatting. We can see peoples who live in other country. On computers we can set up some programs, online-games, and chatting with people of all world.
Then we talk about food. In Kazakhstan you can found food of different countries. For example: in Mc'Donalds, KFC you can found fast food, in other shops you can found korean, chinees, franche food. Also you can found some kazakh's national food in other countries.
Third theme is sport. Many kind of sports have global meaning. People play football, basketball, hockey, golf in many different countries. By the most popular kind of sport often spent different world championships. For example: FIFA world cup, the Olympic games to conclude
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Globalization
Hello! Today I want to tell you about globalization. Globalization is something that connects people from different countries. For example: technologies, music, food, clothes, sport and many other things. But today I tell about three of these things technologies, sport and food.
First I want to tell you about technologies. Technologies are computers, websites, telephones. All of these connect us. By some websites we can talk and chat. We can see people who live in other countries. On computers we can set up some programs, on line-games, and chat with people from all over the world.
Then we talk about food. In Kazakhstan you can find food from different countries. For example: in McDonald's, KFC you can find fast food, in other shops you can find Korean, Chinese, French food. You can also find some Kazakh national food in other countries.
The third thing is sport. Many kinds of sport have global meaning. People play football, basketball, hockey, golf in many different countries. There are different world championships in the most popular kinds of sport. For example: FIFA world cup, Olympic games.
в некоторых случаях мне кажется лучше использовать "tell" а не "talk"
например здесь: "Hello! Today I want to TELL you about globalization"
или здесь: "But today I TELL about three of this...."
кстати, тут лучше б. вр. : "But today I WILL TELL you about three of this...."
помоему всё правильно ...