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Я придумала песню на английском,можете оценить?Вот текст:This fighting lasts a lot,but beige moms arent gonna stop
Ruining your childhood
This isnt gonna end good
Now she's again throwing out another blue car
But how will they make it that far?
This baby got another one brown toy
Doesnt this annoy?

Beige all and only beige
Feels like a life in the cage
But maybe this kid will become brave
After all this isnt a dark cave
He may wont differ the colours
But his mom's mind needs only dollars
She posts everyday on tiktok
After this she gains money a lot

But how can it be aesthetic?
I feel so,so pathetic!
But how can it be aesthetic?I feel so,so pathetic
Oh this poor baby