Дело в том, что я совсем плоха в английском языке.
Не могли бы вы проверить сочинение и исправить кое-где ошибки, если они есть, пожалуйста:)
просто не очень хотелось бы получать 3 балла)
I would like to write about the Sasha's letter because it seem to me that I can help her. The letter says that her family relationship is bad.
I can see Sashas problems. Im shocked by her family,because despite everything, they continues to manage disrespectfully with her. All people nowadays have problems and young people are not an exception.
I think that this girl owes do teenagers things, and not listen to nag of her father and sneers of her brothers.
My opinion is that Sasha does not need advices, the only thing that I wish only patience,but there is no place more delightful than home and there are no people more dear than your relatives.
Grown up's must remember that we are the future of our country and in present moment our character is formed and that's why our parents must not assert pressure on us.
I hope that Sasha will find forces and patience before comes to college.
и почему сразу денег то? а так по доброте душевной ( в прочем не плохо, я чуть чуть исправила, окончания не все были правильные) I would like to write about Sasha's letter because it seems to me that I can help it. In the letter it is said that its family relations are bad.
I see Sasha's problems. I am shaken by her family because despite everything, they continue to treat disrespectfully it. All people have problems presently, and young people not an exception.
I think that this girl has to, do that that to her to liking, and not to listen to grumble of her father and a sneer of her brothers.
My opinion - that Sasha doesn't need councils, the only thing which I wish only, patience, but isn't present any place, more delightful, than the house and isn't present any people, dearer, than your relatives.
The adult has to remember that we - the future of our country, and our character is at the moment built up, and that is why our parents shouldn't press morally on us.I hope that Sasha will find forces and patience before arrives to college.
Ты через гугл чтоль делала? К тому же такая услуга денег стоит.
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