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Good time of the day, Mr. ***!

My name is ***, I’m 17, and I’m your Russian fan. Excuse me my bad English, I’m very bad know his. If you are reading this, then you got my letter, what I am very, very glad.
For the first time I heard about you about one year ago (well, yes, it turns out that I’m your fairly new fan) from my girl friend, who told me about serial “***”, and or rather about Angel ***. She so admired your performance, that I have decided to look this serial too. I have hardly waited fourth season, so as to see you. Your performance simply amazes me. Playing role Castiel, you as if ourselves become he, so enter into role. And your voice and manner to talk… this fantastic! But most of all I like your eyes. It is needed only to glance in them and me as if tightens somewhere far, it is impossible tear away, and all thoughts disappear from head. And generally, I think, that you excellent man with good sense of humour. Do you have favorite films and books? My favorite books “**” author’s *** and “***” author’s ***. And from films… ooh, theirs truly many, but nevertheless, possibly, my favorite films “***” and “***”. And from serials, of course “***” and else “***”. Do you have hobby? Than you are engaged in free time? And how you treat to fan? Oh my God, I sincerely hope, that reading my letter did not take away for you many time, I even fear to present, how many you receive letters in day. May I inquire recognize you people in street, or not? And if yes, how they behave at the sight of you?
I sincerely hope, what you answer me, though and strongly doubt in this. I understand, that you very busy man, and many letter generally possible not reach you.