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Dear Viktor Oleksandrovich,
This is your student Kapeliuh Oleksandr. Now I`m 30 years old. I`m married and I have a child. I have beautiful work and also I`m happy man. And I`m grateful for all these for you, and your school. You had been preparing me for really life until I understood that I want in future. I miss that carefree times that I spend in gymnasium. It has very experienced sraff, and they learnt me how to work, how to developed, and they helped me in chosen of my future way. My gymnasium gave me all necessary to reach my dream, and I grateful for it.
Your student Oleksandr

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ну да... просто я в украинской школе учусь)) Александр это Саня если тебе так понятней)

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staff это персонал

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Dear Viktor Alexandrovich,
I am your former student Kapelyuh Alexander. Now I`m 30 years old, I`m married and have a child. I have a beautiful work and I`m a happy man.
And I`m so grateful to you and your school for all you have given to me. You were preparing me for the real life until I understood what I wanted in the future.
I miss that careless time I spent in our gymnasium. There was a very experienced staff, and the teachers learnt me to work, to develop myself, and they also helped me to choose my future way. My gymnasium gave me all necessary to reach my dream, and I am very grateful for that.
With best wishes,
Your student Alexander.

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что-то не понял) ) что есть имя Олександр?