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You have 30 minutes to do this task.
You have received a letter from your English-speaking pen friend, Ben.

…I’ve just been to the zoo. What lovely animals are there! Bears, tigers and even sharks! When I look at them in the zoo I can hardly imagine that they could be dangerous or eat other animals…
… Which do you think is better for animals – to live in the zoo or in the wild, why? What animals are common in your region? Have you ever seen any animal in the wild? …

Write him a letter and answer his 3 questions.
Write 100–120 words. Remember the rules of letter writing.

Dear Ben,
Sorry, i haven't answered you before. I was too busy with my exams.
In my opinion, it's better for animals to live in the wild, because they have freedom. I know, wild nature is dangerous and violent, but they shouldn't be trapped in the cage.
In my region is very beautiful nature and forests. In the season of hunting people go to the forests to bring some meet. For example: wild ducks, deers and different animals.
I've never seen any animal in the wild. Maybe, that's because wild animals afraid of people. They don't go to the place, where people usually are.
Keep in touch,
Best wishes,
Linara